Analysis of my 2nd feedback sheets for my Music Video

These are the responses from my class mates in regards to my music video upon the second and final viewing of it before it is marked,the responses came in three from: The elements that worked, the elements that need improving and the elements that don't work.

Elements that work well:

• Cinematography
• Lip synching
• Clear narrative
• Messages fit with the story
• Flashback effects
• Good editing
• Good adaptations from previous feedback
• Locations were good

Elements that need improving:

• Shaky camera
• Repetitive locations
• Some shots are too long
• Narrative unclear in some parts
• Needs a change in performance
• Not consistent weather
• Use some slow motion

Elements that don't work:

• Poem at beginning
• Phone sections are too dark/ don't work with the story
• Background doesn't fit
• Need to change up locations
• Cheeky wink at the end
• Head gets cut off in some areas