Friday 16 December 2016

General Analysis of my feedback sheets for my Digipak and Magazine Advert

Elements that worked well:

  • Clear and consistent colour scheme,
  • Very conventional to my artist,
  • Appropriate fonts used,
  • the Track listing is effective,
  • A consistent theme throughout,
  • The pictures used are appropriate,
  • The layout is conventional and effective,
  • The colour scheme works well,


Elements that need adjusting:

  • Blurry picture on the Mag Advert needs to be replaced/ re-shot,
  • The logo looks out of place on the digipak,
  • Too many fonts are used,
  • Magazine looks more like a cover rather than an advert,
  • The spine is too plain,
  • The album cover blends in too much,
  • The social media links need to be more readable,
  • Don't underline anything,
  • Use the same fonts on both Mag Advert and Digipak,
  • Adjust the font colour on the Track Listing,
  • Make the barcode smaller,
  • Make the typography clearer to read,


Elements that don't work:

  • Don't use Comic-Sans,
  • Remove the white background behind the text on Mag Advert,
  • Album cover is too small in the background,

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