- The lip-synching is very effective and precise,
- The cinematography works well,
- The type of location does work,
- Costume conforms to the artist,
- End shot works well with the song,
Elements that need to be developed:
- It is too repetitive-need to change up my locations for my shoot,
- Adjust the clips to reveal the narrative more,
- Need to incorporate different shots-the shot yes are too repetitive,
- Remove the clapping at the end of the song,
- use more panning shots in the video,
- The video needs to be re-shot on a single day,
Elements that don't work:
- The transition at the very beginning doesn't work
- Re-shoot some of the clips-moving vehicles in the background
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